Work with it, take out a few words here, add a few there. You know, maybe to a beat.
you have to get that to flow a bit smoother.
Feeling the theme though still.
You got some real comical shit coming through there
Keep it up homes, just keep writing shit, don't listen to the disses
Nice and fresh

If you do a rewrite post it here, I'd like to read it
Laters