Thread: I aM a WoMaN
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Old 09-01-03, 07:47 PM   #8
XEastSide_QueenX
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iiight I thought this piece was OK. Great meaning, good style, flow needs a lil work ... as well does vocab. But otherwise this poem was tite as hell!!! And I'm a chick so I kinda undastand that stuff betta than tha dudes readin it. OVerall i say 7/10




love me no matter what i do,
call me a “woman”, that is what i am to you.

i am a woman, i can not deny
i am real and i will not lie,

^^^^ Great Lines!!! ^^^^
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