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iiight I thought this piece was OK. Great meaning, good style, flow needs a lil work ... as well does vocab. But otherwise this poem was tite as hell!!! And I'm a chick so I kinda undastand that stuff betta than tha dudes readin it. OVerall i say 7/10
love me no matter what i do,
call me a “woman”, that is what i am to you.
i am a woman, i can not deny
i am real and i will not lie,
^^^^ Great Lines!!! ^^^^
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Dealing with backstabbers, there was one thing I learned
They're only powerful when you got your back turned
I yearn for the day I finally meet them again
So I can give them all a taste of their own medicine
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