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Old 09-01-03, 08:14 PM   #14
BiZzUrK
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From: ILL-I-NOIS
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Was it that bad a student?... Cause from day one my game failed me/
A train of lines to advance my chance but a simple glance straight derailed me/
These feelings should be a fallacy, but shes the projection of every fantasy/
Outta my league... Searching for ways to justify her fascination in me/
Made the decision... Time to pursue but the game's still in a rut/
Its like Chrit's at a loss for words... and all I've found is "What?..."/

I was really feeling these first 4 lines, I could undastand what ya was go'n through there, and I was actaully laughing out loud with that last one there
tight piece overall, I was feel'n tha flo and the subject matter, nice return Chrit,
use da pen to stay out da pen<----------------(dope)
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