aight. PimpX your verse didnt have strong Punches.
the Only line that was half decent was the Finisher,
in my opinion. You have to Be clever, creative and
diss on your Opponent so it Affends them. You "NOT"
being "Sentimental" as an End to A punch is Boring.


This nigga is stupid thats why hes mentally kursed/
Battle me 8 times and yo record will be reversed/


that was Suprising to hear from you After hearing
reading your other Lines. This Punch was Ok. But
of-course this Could have been worded Much Better.
Over-all I liked it. Not your Whole Verse, Just the
last Line.
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Mentally Cursed. Your 1rst Line was Ok. I dont think I've
heard a Line Exactly Like this, as simple as the Punch
sounds.


Pimpx01 decapitatin emcess is the only time he gets a head//
tearin your body to shreds, sleepin underground wit worms playin dead//



this line was Shitty in my opinion. No Hate or anything, but
this line is Notice-able because is so muck Wacker then your
other Lines (Filler)..

oh no, your flow was good, I better run and take action//
my verse leave voters on edge, like infants held by Michael Jackson//

this was your Best line in the Verse. Michael Jackson
Jokes are played as Fuck, But you changed it a Little
and made it Funny. i didnt like the Set-up at all tho.
(flow was good, take action)..naw..lol
Over-all verse was Decent. Nice Battle.



Vote-Mentally Cursed
sorry i cant POLL VOTE, but i aint a NEWB.

Fuck Sleepers! . .POLL

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