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Old 09-01-03, 10:23 PM   #2
Tourniquet
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Really Nice Piece Soultress, made me think of all the innocence lost from my own childhood, when I was just a wee girl with so many dreams. How easily they are trodden on as we grow.
The loss of the naivete.
Interesting how you have incorporated the lyrics into the poem, or perhaps the poem is built around the lyrics I should say.. always good to see new techniques.

Kudos~
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