Spectator
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IP:
Shes gonna reach up looking for her daddy, shes gonna want to hold your hand
But she won't be able to because you walked out on you family
Who know she might cry everynight asking " Mommy doesn't daddy love me"
And then I'll tell her "yes he does baby, you're perfect in every way"
"It's me your daddy didn't love, It's because of me he wouldn't stay"
This is what I really took from the work. The intimacy here is beautiful. ANd you have written it so well, it flows ingeniously. I love this bit.. Ive been there, Ive had this conversation with my daughter, so I really felt this part. So very well done. Kudos~
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