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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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Originally posted by AngellicalR
aight, that shit was EXTREMELY basic, u need to put some word-play in it, aight u did have some but :
itll be gone in a flash like a flash light/
is WAY to simple, change tha flash light wit a camera or sumtin, jus keep workin and keep takin advice and puttin it in ur flow u'll get somewhere...
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i agree with that, being that i know what its like to have to flow simple i can say that it was a good drop. the vocab and wordplay were there but they were basic. just keep reading, freestyling or what ever you do...
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