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Old 09-02-03, 12:40 AM   #3
The Necromancer
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I can actually relate to this peice too. Once I thought I was in love with this one guy, but then I remembered I'm not gay. So I just settled for his girlfriend, but it happened that she was gay. So me and that one guy got drunk and headbutted each other... and that has no relation whatsoever to your poem... sorry...

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THen i wonder if perhaps im making myself belive im in love
of if god even meant to create a force this strong up above
i once thought he made love for us and our true pleasure
but why would he create something that pains us in no way measured
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That part really provoked some thought. I mean, what is the purpose of the emotion of love? And what good does it do if it causes so much pain?

I dunno how intentional it was, but this peice tugged at the mind just as much as it tugged at the heart like so much proverbial strings of a harp.

~Shalom~
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