aight. xL4reaL your ryme scheme was ok. It could have been
better tho, by alot. There's one thing that annoyed me alot.
more then half your verse started with "you this", "You that".
that gets boring.

You think ya cool but train spotting is the only way you playstation,
You cum when I spit cuz its verbal masturbation,
You prick your sick you had premature ejaculation.
In amazement ya dazed at my deliverence and presentation.

your first line had Nice WordPlay. The following two lines werent
strong at all in my opinion. the last line in your verse was ok.
It was different to me. Even tho you talked about yourself in a
battle i thought that line was Creative. It flowed well.
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aight. Nucca your ryme scheme wasn't as good as XL'S.
for example, your first Line.

As i proceed to bury XL4REAL, the loss he feels in unreal, the lyrical dirt rises over his head now he knowin hes dead--

the Beggining souned Nice, until that Lyrical dirt/he's Dead.
that didnt flow very well at all for me.

I liked your personals, but the way you wrote them made
them sound weaker then what they could have been.
(word it different)
both verses were Ok, but both could have been much, much better in my opinion. lol
XL came with a little better punches, where as Nucca had simpilistic Flows. doesnt matter if you have simplistic flows but
your punches have to HIT.
Over-all, this was an Ok battle. Good match, but..


my vote-xl
sorry i cant POLL VOTE, but i aint a NEWB.


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