aight. Rappad your verse was Ok. I liked your Ryme Scheme
and the way your verse Flowed.

To excuse and mangle without any trace like 'ghost arms'//
Check mail everyday? Ya flow's out of date like "have you seen me?" post cards//


I liked your creativity here. Nice. rymed well and Good punch.


Ya stomach's cracked from the breakdown i 'spit acid'//
I'm the chiropractic' of kicking Ass, so let's get this 'shit cracking//


This line got me thinking of Drugs..lol
Your Little drug talk here was creative as well.
(stomacks Cracked/spit acid/shit Cracking..)
could have been easier to understand but i guess you went
a little complex with the thinking..(newbie Votes wouldnt see).

Over-all, both your verse were Decent, But Rappad had Btter Flow Most Definatly and Better plus More Punches.

my vote-rappad
sorry i cant POLL VOTE, BUT i aint a NEWB.

Fuck Sleepers. . . .POLL VOTES NEEDED
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