aight. Syscol your verse sounded simple. Its Ok
to have a simple sounding verse but you want
better punches if you do so.

your Very first line was the best. Just because
of the wordplay in that. None of your Punches
really STOOD OUT at all. No personals, which can really
help you win a Battle. You have the IDEA down on your Punches, You juss have to make them sound Better with Better
Flow as well.
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aight. K-O your verse was Aight. Your kinda sorta Multie in the first 2 or 3 lines was Decent, i liked the Ending with 50.
some parts of your verse juss sounds like you watched
comedy central and posted there Joke. for Example.

do the right thing pass this battle on or drop it now have u screamin "HOT POTATO" when my verse comes down//2

Ok, that was an Ok punch, but this shit doesnt sound
right. It has No-Flow or Ryme schem what so Ever in
my opinion.

none of your other verses stood out. Seemed like
you thought of a few Good lines, then said "fuck it".
the Middle and End of your Verse wasnt that Strong.

Over-all this battle was Ok. But one man took this
my Vote-KO..

sorry i cant POLL VOTE, but i aint a NEWB.

Fuck Sleepers. . . .POLL VOTES NEEDED
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