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Not a bad piece for that late at night, flow was a little shaky to start with but you picked it up as you went on, multi's were consistant with the verse, could of used more internals in my opinion, i got the wordplay in this, you didnt need to use the quotation marks, good vocabulary, original topic, all in all not a bad piece, props.
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