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Old 09-02-03, 06:25 AM   #13
Dr.SeusS
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From: ..Fuck You..
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aight. V-Killa your ryme scheme was Ok. But your
punches Lacked, BadLey. Your best Line was your Bery 1rst Line.


take my advice your best bet's to get out the game and find yourself religion/
cuz bitches like you get served like bums/



W.T.F is this. your finisher was WEAK!...???^^
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K-O your verse was alot smoother to read (Flow)..
You had some good punches. No punches STOOD OUT
in either verse, but some hit harder then Other's.

[B]OverAll i liked both Verses.lol(watching NEWB'S ELEVATE LOL)