Yah umm ... this piece wasn't bad, the flow just need a little work. i undastand the emotion put forth in this poem, it just kinda sounded a little different, which is iight. But yah i Did get alil lost in the poem ... Structure is a little weak

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Dealing with backstabbers, there was one thing I learned
They're only powerful when you got your back turned
I yearn for the day I finally meet them again
So I can give them all a taste of their own medicine
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