yah I agree, I wasn't drawn into this poem throughout the entire thing, but you did keep my interest. The repeating "I wish, I wish he'd go away" worked out nicely. At first, I didn't think it would fit the structure of the poem, but it worked perfectly.

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Dealing with backstabbers, there was one thing I learned
They're only powerful when you got your back turned
I yearn for the day I finally meet them again
So I can give them all a taste of their own medicine
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