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Old 09-02-03, 02:42 PM   #4
west
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yo as others have said i think this lacked a little sumthin,but i did like the hook and tha verses were also well constructed and contained what they should have
e'g,wordplay,message,expression,i jus felt maybe a lil more on tha second verse would have been better,but it was a descent drop.

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