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Old 09-02-03, 02:52 PM   #8
tsheff112
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77400

Hit this up, let me get that feedback... There's no rules for this one because I live next door to the opponent, so we already know.

Pimpin01: I like your shit and you have the odds against you when you're first up. Your flow was on point, but the vocab was a little thin... Still an overall tight flow, don't get me wrong. Keep up that good shit.

Crypt: I have to say that you ripped this one. You already came into this with the advantage of second, but I like the way you flow. Good on the vocab. I don't have enough posts to vote, but my vote goes to you.

Favorite lines:
Pimpin01:You like Ja-Rule niggas just dont like you neither do i nigga all I wanna do is fight you/
Im pimpin yo bitch i tell her what to do Next time shes givin you dome she gonna bite you/

Crypt:U gettin fucked up Like Dialated Eye Sockets, robbed blind like punks who Pick Pockets/
U Admire my skills, if you had a necklese wit a heart my face would be In the Locket/

Good original shit to both. Keep it up. Hit up that link and drop a line!
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