I remember you from RNR, Johnny.


Overall, an okay piece. The flow and rhyme scheme etc. were
good, but the content wasn't. But due to the fact that this is
supposed to be a song, which means it should be in audio, it will
be acceptable because people won't be able to read the lyrics
like they can hear. Good flow though, so spit it to a track and
upload it, unless you've already done so, lol.

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