<--- Camarac


Nice piece my man, good imagery, the internals worked well with the flow to the piece, the interaction between the characters added to this nicely, great storytelling, i loved the build up of the "And im driving down this road. .' that added to it a lot by repeating those lines, it kept the build up strong, the finish rounded it off nicely, all in all it made for a good read.

Props!