Dopeness.
Easily one of the better pieces posted in this forum this week, nice topic and you portraid it well, flow was on-point throughout, great story telling ability shown, good word choice, a little on the short side, id probably of gotten into it more if you'd of extended it, but this was nicely written, finish rounded it off nicely, Props to you my girl!

Yeah, i was at RnR so i know your female = )