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Old 09-02-03, 07:41 PM   #7
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DJ Pulse had no creativeness throughtout his verse and all his punches were just fuckin stupid...Pimpx01 came with played out metaphors and had absolutely no flow until tha last bar, reword your lines so they dont stretch so long....Well my vote has to go to Pimpx01 because he actually attempted to use creativity in his verse instead of using played out mom disses....Yall need to do some serious elevating, keep writing....
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