Thread: For Her
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Old 09-03-03, 01:50 AM   #4
Mr.Christensen
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i agree with g. the flow was hard to find
was-this-an-attempt-at-a-multi?
if so then i think you should tone down the amount of them cause unless your gonna be 100% consitent on them... just do like 6 a bar or so (bar=4 lines)

take that how you want...

*edit*

ohh yea... that was good... my bad totally got lost...
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