PS. WORDPERFECT took this... begining was wack... you need to fix your bar structure... you got potential... i saw some creativity and potentially original punches.. your verse was ok.. but you could do with structure.. STRONG multis... mark my words... yada yada yada all the ingredients of a good verse... check the good verses as example... and study them to see what i mean... if you want references... i can help you with that