Thread: The Real World (Step In If U Ready For Dis)
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Old 09-03-03, 02:54 AM   #8
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Originally posted by west
try and extend ur bars a lil to include more wordplay,and vocab,it had flow and was a good starter peice.



Overall I liked it..................

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