For the most part I liked it but there were a few lines I would've changed like (Don't bother tryin' me your outta this class
I school you, fuel you, set fire to you like blast, blast, blast!)
and I lost ur flow wit (at last, I forgot to mention, this shit is beyond comprehension
listen clearly man have i got your attention?)

Other than that it was cool and good for a newbie...........
Keep elevatin as I am..........................

PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>