good work man, lotta potential:-

"Im the motha fukin P I M P there aint none like me cant u see ya try to break me shake me try to be like me but u cant do me. u aint nothin to me just another fuckin wanabe."

Some nice lines^^^, you obviously have a good grasp of internals, just need to be a lil more creative with your rhymes (i.e. not just me, be, see, free, etc)

But real good shit overall look forward to hearin' more