rs killed it -- word perfect -- well, erm, be direct- -- diss and insult your oponent more freqeuently and only have like 2 wordplays or 1 per bar... flow is easy... just rhyme, couplet -- rhyme... aight... punch, put in few wordplay -- use teh relevant vocab -- and you should improve, i'mean the sucked like hell .. but i got to tell you straight... rs?? sickseed did more damage than you did, his lines would have killed you both... please please just elevate... don't force shit... just diss in the process of rhyming