damm... ain't nobody saying shit huh...

Yo no disrespect, but I'm guessing it's because some heads might not even have read the whole thing... Your concept is insightful and all, but the shit does tend to get a bit boring for some...

You definitely had some strong vocab up in this, you made it deep, and you seem to have put alot of emphasis on it... but yo, I think you saying too much dawg, I mean the verses might not be that long... but it's like you're craming as much info as you can in each line... cats might get tired to read and shit.. lol...

I personally thought the concept was good, but it's been heard though... oh... I really like this first line "Demonic spells casting over tha world coz violence sells" it was favorite one...

keep doing your thing man, you got skill, this shit proves it... but like I said, it seemed like you crammed too much in it...

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