good drop
interesting topic
the history of the worlds wars n shit was kind of condensed
and done well...liked the topic
liked the way u used julius ceasar n genghis n shit..helped keep it good to read
bar lentgh and flow was a bit dodgy in some parts...u still need to work on ryhming thru out the piece....ie interbar rhyming
vocab was good and didnt feel unecessary
overall nice but needs a few touches
also a bit of imagery and wordplay helps