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That was pretty damn good, man...
Nice message.
And I like the way ya didn't dive in and talk about how thug you are.
Ya just rap about what you see which I can appreciate a helluva lot more than false hoodlum messages.
Like West said, for your opener...
Find another rhyming word.
But the bulk of it had good flow, deep meaning, and a kinda catchy albeit off course kinda closer.
I say off course cuz ya went from a deep message to a self-prop all of a sudden...
But it stayed on target for the most part.
Keep at it, man.
Good shit.
Peace
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