Pft, this isn't the medieval ages. You don't need to use a pen, we have these things called keyboards now. And... uh... not funny.

Anyway, this was a good read. A bit off the top I see. The first verse for instance, I would take as being literal. As in, you be smelling stuff and yet you aint able to smell anything.

But then you go off on emotions. And the imagry I have in my head is of a happy healthy woman slowly changing into a crumbling statue of empty salt. It just seems like entropy.

Then you speak of love, and for a glimpse things seemed well again. But as it happens you speak of not having love, and things in my mind just seem to atrophy again.

Personally, I can really feel the imagry in this peice. I dunno about others, but I could "see" what was going on.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.