Veteran
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IP:
The ultra mega breakdown...
1st Bar...
You'll be shook n weak prey... sprung off cancer and drugs,
see you'd be surprised how rapid ya blood cells... when put on ebay...
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Avalon c'mon bitch....that shit u spit was pure garbage,
Comin at me wit half wits....U Might as well be retarded...
I really don't see the punch from Avalon.
Great wordplay, but where's the diss?
Ice's opener was played but at least it hit.
ICE
2nd Bar
I realize ya mom didn't want you... watch Av put this in action,
hated me so much... she spent hours in labor... to put you back in...
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Dont get me Started...Avalon ya skills is gone & rap u might as well quit it...
Regime wonderin why they 'ass in pain'..."If it Hurts....Av Did it" (LoL)
Tough choice...
Great diss from Avalon
Laughed out loud for Ice's.
TIE
3rd Bar
I'm viscious ta fuck with... ya eyes mist & erupt quick
& when I see them tears runnin... I'ma put them bitches on crutches...
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Beat Me? Forget it....U gotta betta chance of hittin the lotto,
Matter Of fact U gotta betta chance Of Chrit not usin "What?" as his motto...(What?)
Gotta give the wordplay and punch to Avalon here.
Just better. Flat out.
AVALON
4th Bar
So return ta ya crib before this drama unfolds,
Or Av'll cut ya fuckin throat... dj style... like ya neck had volume control...
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Follow me as I hit you wit tips thats hollow,
Take a loss 2 day and try ya Better Luck tomorrow...
Neither one is a diss.
One's a threat, the other's advice.
The threat sounds better.
AVALON
5th Bar
So what the fuck can ya do ta save you from tearin' and shredding?
Well ya can start off ya career with a blow job... like American Wedding...
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Av never had any skills to begin with, Just ask Knightshade,
Retired from the Game like a lame becuz his pussy ass got played..
I like it when things get personal.
Avalon's didn't quite grab me cuz, what career?
And if ya mean rapping, his record shows he ain't just starting.
Personal punch takes this.
ICE
6th Bar
The title’s mine... I merk... & I’m coppin’ it now
Cos ya’ body’s fully hidden in a trash can like Oscar the Grouch...
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Came back like he mean, decided to join the Regime,
with 13th and Thug Wack... the fuckin "Herb allstar" team....
Come on.
No contest.
Much harder and much more personal.
ICE
7th Bar
I'm raping you Ice, remodeling, your well known 'n fondled
Av'll reconstruct your manhood... 'n build pretty pink condos...
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Avalon wanted 2 get it on.....Didnt know what he was in for,
Tryed to stop this ass whoppin at 10....But he begged for more...
Nice ass wordplay from Avalon
Another nice personal from Ice.
Better construction and complexity on one side though.
AVALON
Last Bar
usin my name for fame... claimin to be on top,
this kid is fully comp- uter... he'll die in graphic nature - courtesy of Adobe photoshop...
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Regime tryna settle scores...But to bad it not finna happen...
And Please Believe every one goin down...As Long as I"m rappin...
Wordplay against personal here.
One was catchy and the other left em with something ta think about.
Clearly more impactful considering the outcome.
ICE
That should do it.
Very close, but Ice edges it out.
Great fuckin battle, guys.
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