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Old 09-04-03, 02:51 PM   #4
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This was really filled wit emotion 4 me cuz at the end u tell us "if u wanna live my life go ahead."

i dont wanna live your life but i dont know how to get out of it.

i mean my vato always beats me and ive been raped plenty of tymes.

the only reason it happend is cuz ppl drugged ma drink tha first tyme and it was one of my vatos friends.the other tyme it was my vato.

anywayz really good heartfelt piece .it was not basic i mean most ppl think poetry has to rhyme but i dnt think so.

hope to see more of your pieces.overall i give it a 9/10!


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