<-- Baron Mynd
I personally thought this was dope, one of the better storytelling verses ive seen from you infact. flow was pretty on point throughout, nice use of multi's, good storytelling, subtle wordplay at the beginning that caught my eye, a few stand-out quoteable lines here and there, i loved this one in particular:
Quote:
He's seen hell & it's ugly, seen friends cough up puke and teeth
And Seen helmets of blood where his friends' heads used to be
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Ahhhhh, worded dopely my man, i like stuff like that. All in all a great piece, definatly not one that should be slept on here.
Props!