A very well written sad piece you came up with here. It does look like you put some work into it, like Krem said, but it probably only took you 10 minutes since I know you got skills like that
This made me sad cause I've had great friends where no one else would really care to get to know them just cause of how they looked. You definately brought up old memories of that stuff when I read this. I can't really see anything in this I didn't like. All of it kept my attention and I enjoyed reading it. You did good with this and I hope you keep dropping..
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Originally posted by The Necromancer
She couldn't leave her trailer, less be shunned by society
But his fathers arms were wide open and he said "Come to me"
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Was that part a typo? Just wondering..