see, i can't comment as it bein a second free cause i was always good, ha ha, but seriously, u had wordplay and wat not but it was unorganized, thus, i couldn't comment on tha flow except that it seemed to stop at times, also don't make tha flow BASIC, it's jus borin, in otha words, hide ur meanings of ur shit u tryin to say, jus keep writin frees or spittin frees in tha shower, it's wat i do, then u'll start to elevate...

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