simply put, where's tha wordplay? it seemed like an Em rhyme to me and everything he writes, he makes u go "huh?" than "oh" than a couple secs later "DAMN!", if u can get that in a line, it would help tha flow a lot, oh, u tried to much to get a good endin line, it didn't hit me hard, it wasn't like u jus was sayin "NOW WAT BITCH!" jus come hard at tha end, esp since as befo, i felt this was sorta like an Em rhyme, jus keep risin to a new elevation...

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