that fact that it WAS written in a simple form stopped me from bein bored otherwise i would've been...it was nice but had no wordplay or anything, if i gave a word of advice it would be to center on one topic, it's easier, or mayb a topic to each verse... jus my opinions, im an opiniated man u kno, hit ur head on a cloud, naomean?...

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