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Old 09-04-03, 09:56 PM   #6
Dr.SeusS
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aight. Rappad your Verse was more complex then Cryp.
It had more Wordplay as well. Your 1rst line had the
best Flow, but your TRIPLE THREAT LINE was your
hardest hitting Line. I think iv'e voted on another
battle of yours b-4, and iv'e seen better from you
PUNCHES wise. Over-all. I liked your Creativity.
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I want everybody to Witness This Fuckin vet lose nobody should Miss this Caption/
Rappad Wouldnt be on top of me if he was The Numerator In an Improper Fraction/


this line STOOD OUT the most to me in your Verse Cryp.
your verse was Simpler then Rappad's but you tried
to hit harder with Ounches, in some ways you did, but also
didnt. I didnt like your ryme scheme after your first 4 lines.
the punches could have been worded better, so the
flow wasnt so Choppy. That XL4REAL line was Nice.

Complexity-rappad
Ryme scheme-Tied
Vocab-Rappad
Punches-Tied, but edging towards Cryp
Personals-Cryp

VOTE-Cryp..
sorry i cant POLL vote yet, But i aint A NEWB.


FuCK SleePeRs. . . POLL votes NeEdeD
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=77358
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=77500