Aight. InvaliD, your verse was Ok..I liked some of your
punches. but honesty your verse got boring to read after
a while.
Look, this cat is a bigger pussy than whore with 30 different kids//4
Its sad to see that he puts an open challenge and asks for someone with wins!//5 hahahahaha
that was your funniest Line. This line stood out the Most.
your very first Line Bout the EYES was Clever and Creative.
your ryme Scheme was Ok, but it could have been Better.
Over-all your verse was Decent.
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WHy must you recite weak rhymes?- i dont need those/My shit is tight, like a fat man in shrunken speedos/
that was your funniest Line. Even tho some of those
lines are Played..you made that sound Good.
Physclops, you had a much better Ryme Scheme. Multies were
better to. Your punches were better as well. I say this cuz you dropped some PERSONALS that made me laugh, but
they hit Good, and Flowed well as well.
Nice Battle..
vote- PsYkLoPsE
FuCK SleePeRs. . .
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