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Old 09-04-03, 10:26 PM   #14
Dr.SeusS
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aight. Insert, your Ryme scheme was choppy in parts.
for EXAMPLE..

Cuz nigga you just got -Sonned- and here meet the family
with ya crew, go sit by illness and the fucking rest of RB


the first line was Nice. Good wordplay. But the Follow up
flowed shitty.

Over-all your verse was Decent..
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Like local serial killings, this bitch wants to know my identity, cause hes shittin his pants//
The more you elevate the more herbish you get, like Marijuana Plants//



i aint never heard this Line before in any way. as simple as it sounds.
This one line honestly Won the Battle. Your ryme scheme was good, and punches were much better then Inserts...

NICE BATTLE TO THE BOTH...
VOTE-XPLICIT
sorry i cant POLL VOTE..


FuCK SleePeRs. . .
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