No offense, but my first inclination was "not another 'real' life piece". You know that shits been played talking about where you grew up and how bad you had it (we can thank Eminem for playing it out).

BUTT... and this is a big BUT. this piece was exquiste. Everything coincided with one another. Everything was fitting. Well written without sacrificing emotion and heart and it really shines in this piece. Whether or not its true, I felt like you were actually telling me your story verses bragging about how you overcame like some other pieces tend to turn out on subjects similar to this.

You have many catching lines. Again beautifully written without compromising tact.

'Ignorant i often stole from the hand that feeds me,
The same person who Raised and conceived me,' -nice way to refer to the parentals. most would go the simple route
'Is he laughing that i fucked up and chose the route of that temps me, If god forgives then why do i still feel empty.' - a universal feeling that many can relate to
'Put in rehab and padded rooms for 6 months,
I got out and in 3 i had the urge to steal stuff,' -displaying the nasty truth. I'm strongly against psychiatric drugging of children, and this line shows how 'we' collectively help humanity. This line got to me

This was a great piece. I really enjoyed something that I would normally pass up. Kudos. Keep posting.

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