IMHO...

It wasn't my cup of tea. Sounds like a sugar coated Eminem song. This however would do well on mainstream, they love degrading woman. It's not only subject matter, but verse quality. This piece seems extremely elementary, and reads as if it was written in minutes. Maybe if you threw in a couple cleverly thought out puns, it would have held my attention more so.

Maybe it's because I can't relate to this piece...

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