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i thought it was funny..............didn't really see it degrading women so much as kinda poking fun at men and how we think.........face most of us guys don't enter a relationship with the hope it will "turn into something"...............lyrically you were a little elementary...........i'd take this as like a rough draft and add some stuff spice it up a little but keep the same sense of humor and emotion this piece had.............i'd like to read what you come up with................1
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