Smooth indeed, the flow was incredbile. And pretty good upped vocab to go along with everything, while suprisingly not being forced or artificial. This poem was just very elevated, but very natural. And that, in itself, is very hard to do.

I thought this to be a very depressive peice. I mean, I can relate to it a hundred percent, on the real. But I guess we have different reactions. The first verse, I can completly understand. But when I have those thoughts, I generally become suicidal. I mean, no hope at all... so why bother with anything? But you reacted by just not giving a fuck, by basicly becoming cold inside. Even though you aint supposed to be.

Much Respect.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.