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Old 09-05-03, 10:03 AM   #7
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pretty good battle.....Funda u had some nice rhymes....and better vocabulary than XL.....but ur wordplay didn't make sense in some parts...(i.e. Aint worth my saliva GLAND, I'd rather bust SEMEN on your mic STAND!/) u also used played lines (i.e. anything dealin with Biggie and Tupac, Leave ya LOST and wonderin where ya at like BIGGIE when PAC GOT SHOT) ur disses weren't really directed towards him.....but overall u had some pretty good shit......XL...u had better consistency and punches in ur verse.....duracell line was pretty tight....super nova line was good and duck line was coo.......overall if u did a breakdown......i gotta say XL got this because of his consistency and direct punches......no hate just a vote....

Check this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77510

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