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Old 09-05-03, 03:03 PM   #9
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Again with my ultra mega breakdown so HERBS (and you know who you are) can whine all you want to I.R.
My ass is covered.

1st Bar
when he writes, he aint saying nothing.. fakin Nice
so i'll start off by stating.. Your Wack & Break the Ice

VS
Evolve "Your not as iLL as Me"...I'm RB's lyrical Highness...
"Perfection at it's Finest?"....U More like "Defection wit a minus"...


Great flow from both...
One had much better wordplay and a harder punch though.

EVOLVE

2nd Bar
go head, take the dice.. step up & Press your Luck
watch Berg Crap Out & get De-Pressed ^^ its Stuck

VS
Fuckin Has-been ass nigga....U Used to be the leader of ya own crew...
Gave it up to join Regime with 13th, & them candy ass roody poo's...


Don't care much for keyboard disses.
The other one was personal, hit harder, and had a great WWE reference...(I love my wrestling)

ICE

3rd Bar
cause its No Guess you suck.. just a Sure Shot to lose
like an Alcoholic w/ a Knot.. your all for the Boo's

VS
U truely knew that A.I.'s reign had came to its final stop,
Still no reason to join a buncha panzies in panties & halter tops...


I might get criticized for not understanding the wordplay, but fuck it, I just don't get the knot thing.
The other was personal and hit harder

ICE

4th Bar
leave you dazed & confused.. like a Maze In Views
& its Amazin you...Aren't Into any Bitches but.........
the Bitch Stays in You

VS
Evolve watch....As I deliver 'hits' to ya head like Extacsy drug dealers....
U'll never be considered dope, 'rollin' wit fake vets & rhyme stealers...


Both had great flow and hard hits...
But, one seems a bit played and the other was fresh as shit to me.

EVOLVE

5th Bar
i'll slay your crew.. can't believe you rhyme that way
420.. dawg, it dont matter.. compared to me
your Second any Time of Day

VS
Ya Verse? Is just a time filler....this battle aint shit but a cake-walk....
Thought I was in 4 a beat down....guess His Punches had the day-off...


Again, fantastic flow from both.
Great wordplay on both parts.
Hard punch on both parts.
I liked the personal on 420, but I really think the slightly harder hit came from...

ICE

6th Bar
yes, i Shine that way.. enough to melt Bergs of Ice
& its true, i Police these boards.. but even i don't
recite this Hurb's Writes

VS
U made soft.....Punchlines hittin about as hard as a pillow....
Evolve Verse get dissolved, like acid applied to cigarillows....


I don't know why police would be recitin in the first place.
Good flow, but the punch missed.
And, acid don't be disolvin cigarillo's, fire does, but still, ya made ya point.

ICE

Last Bar
im a Hazard to his Enviornment.. i Errode w/ no warning
so its only Natural i destroy IceBergs like.. Global Warming

VS
Wheres ya skill though...His Verse look like its on a diet....
Geta Easy win from Me?....Bitch I'd like to see U try it...


Way, way better closer. Better wordplay, harder punch, better flow.

EVOLVE

So, where's that got us?

Ice wins...
By a cunt hair.
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