Tight as hell opening bar:
Was it that bad a student?... Cause from day one my game failed me/
A train of lines to advance my chance but a simple glance straight derailed me/

Nice lines:
Feelings grow... but most of all the disappointment in myself/
It's like Chrit's life's a library with all my words still on the shelf/

Foot in the door... But who knows what she could possibly have in store/
But Chrit's mind is made up like Joe "Cause I dont wanna be a playa no more"/
^^ill joe reference

OVERALL: nice as hell, I heard you were tight but this is just amazing, keep up the good work dawg