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Old 09-06-03, 02:20 PM   #4
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From: Tha heart of tha devil
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nice shit man, u told a story wit vivid detail, and it was a story that is tru to life, this shit really happens, one problem has to do wit me and that's tha 3-line rhyme scheme, hard for me to read unless i slow it down, good-piece though, hit ur head on a cloud naomean...
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