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Originally posted by AngellicalR
yo, liked it, it was aight, tha uneven bars screwed up tha flow at times but if i read tha part again it made sense, tha vocab was there and u had some deep wordplay mixed in, i liked it overall, it would be good as an audio, hit ur head on a cloud, naomean? ...
peep my shit if u will...
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yo thanx for the feed back homie this my first drop in a while
and ill peep yo shit fa-sho |